Comments
3 years ago
I have to admit that was one of the most erotic stories I have read in quite some time. Bravo! n.n
2 years ago
Very cute story.
If they had been human her lack of panic at finding her brother in her the first time would not have been believable. But being a feline, it's easy to believe that stronger instincts and a lower fear threshold would have allowed things to play out as described.
Good pacing. And sneaking in his dream sequence w/o our at first realizing it was a dream worked very well too.
I look forward to reading the rest of this series.
If they had been human her lack of panic at finding her brother in her the first time would not have been believable. But being a feline, it's easy to believe that stronger instincts and a lower fear threshold would have allowed things to play out as described.
Good pacing. And sneaking in his dream sequence w/o our at first realizing it was a dream worked very well too.
I look forward to reading the rest of this series.
2 years ago
You are obviously a skilled writer. Good job. I look forward to reading the other parts to this story.
2 years ago
Very good job on making something very innocent yet naught at the same time. I liked the descriptiveness, the unknowing of what is actually happening, and the instinctual impulse. Overall, great worthy of a five job. :)
7 months ago
Amazing attention to detail... best story I've read in a long time and I love how you seem to have struck a chord and found the perfect blend between innocence and naughty thoughts/behaviors with this particular story. A job well done and keep up the amazing work! :-)
3 months ago
I cant bileave how cute and innocent that was yet so so naughty and sexual. Great detail and depth, nice job and Icant wait to read the rest of the series. Keep up the good work.
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