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Unbelievably cute and subtle. I loved how innocent they were and enjoyed the gentleness of the two


very good story


Awsome writing. You have a skill for writing



I luvs to cuddle! =3


Intressting...Kind a cute too. 4/5


Great job, I hope you update soon!


so innocent but so dirty


I have to admit that was one of the most erotic stories I have read in quite some time. Bravo! n.n


amazing story, first yiff sotry i ever read.


So cute, yet so naughty... Loved it. Looking forward to reading more.


Very cute story.

If they had been human her lack of panic at finding her brother in her the first time would not have been believable. But being a feline, it's easy to believe that stronger instincts and a lower fear threshold would have allowed things to play out as described.

Good pacing. And sneaking in his dream sequence w/o our at first realizing it was a dream worked very well too.

I look forward to reading the rest of this series.


You are obviously a skilled writer. Good job. I look forward to reading the other parts to this story.


Very good job on making something very innocent yet naught at the same time. I liked the descriptiveness, the unknowing of what is actually happening, and the instinctual impulse. Overall, great worthy of a five job. :)


Interesting, I like it!


Well done! Lots of detail, nice and long, just the way I like it.
-FurryForlife(FFL)


i love it


I am *so* glad I'm reading these again!


Amazing story, cant wait to read the rest of them ^.^


I agree with Wolfblitzer 5/5


This has to be one of the best stories I have ever read....Bravo!!!


Amazing attention to detail... best story I've read in a long time and I love how you seem to have struck a chord and found the perfect blend between innocence and naughty thoughts/behaviors with this particular story. A job well done and keep up the amazing work! :-)


i cant wait to read the rest of the series :)


awwwwww young cub love, innocent mating. *meowl*


I cant bileave how cute and innocent that was yet so so naughty and sexual. Great detail and depth, nice job and Icant wait to read the rest of the series. Keep up the good work.


I have found another great series here. I cannot wait to read on.

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