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*deskpounds with laughter* I... I dont even know where to begin!


Um... I really hate to say anything I am probably the last one to talk, but 3 statements have to be said, one if you are a new writer and aren't so good, can you please remove this before someone mocks you, I am not saying it's bad, but trying giving it a little more detail and work, two, if you argue back with that last statement I have a feeling you may be underage and can't write to well due to education, in which case this site isn't for you, or you think I am against you, which I am really not trying to convey here, and three, if you are a trolling, why the hell man, why the hell, hopefully one or two is the truth, and hopefully no one will mock you in a none critiquing way, I will say, if you were to use this as a vague outline for a story idea, it could work, but I wouldn't suggest posting it without some work to the details, and possibly check grammar for quotes and such. It isn't a bad concept for a story, someone is bound to like the idea of it, but give it a little more effort if you are not trolling, and make yourself sound more sophisticated, that way people won't mock you, people here can be cruel, as in any site that allows you to present art, so be careful in what you post.


"AN I am not good at writing storys..." Really now? " ...and this is only like my third story so be gental." You set the bar AWFULLY high there, neighbor.
So, does the pin inserted in the head inspiration come from a real life head trauma, or a suggested method for better enjoying your stories?

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