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2 years ago
Your story is absolute Awesome.
You want to know how this will continue ^^
But its strange, i cant come over that *Pet* thing.
No matter how much i read over it, it keeps me getting angry, hurting my pride.
Strange, that a story can make you feel angry, isnt it? But otherwise thats a sign for a really great story when it can take control over your own emotions while reading it!
I think Sam is a bad person, threatening everyone like a slave without freedom, but thats only my point of few and dont mean to offend you of course!
But i would like to know if Collin will maybe free himself from that Collar? Becoming an Equal again?
I cant wait to read more, please go on! ^^
You want to know how this will continue ^^
But its strange, i cant come over that *Pet* thing.
No matter how much i read over it, it keeps me getting angry, hurting my pride.
Strange, that a story can make you feel angry, isnt it? But otherwise thats a sign for a really great story when it can take control over your own emotions while reading it!
I think Sam is a bad person, threatening everyone like a slave without freedom, but thats only my point of few and dont mean to offend you of course!
But i would like to know if Collin will maybe free himself from that Collar? Becoming an Equal again?
I cant wait to read more, please go on! ^^
2 years ago
Heheh, it's kind of a compliment and a bit surprising that someone would get angry over a story I helped in. Personally I didn't think many people would even read this without wondering 'Who da f**k is Arlian?!'
Anyway, that's for enjoying the series.
Anyway, that's for enjoying the series.
2 years ago
I totally agree with you on the pet and owner relationship...but as you can see, they are all happy there so whats the big deal. Just hope collin can get over his fears.
2 years ago
Wow, I'm so lucky to have found this story. I view vore exactly the same way as the authors seem to, and everything in this story is really exciting and hot to me. When I first started reading this story I didn't see the tags and just thought it would be like normal sex stuff, which I'm not as into, but even that was turning me on because you're such great writers. I really really love this story. Please keep it up!
I really liked the squirrel chocolate anal scatty stuff. XD That was a lot of fun. I can't wait to see Colin shoved up all kinds of butts and down mouths and I'm really curious to see how the relationship between Colin and Sam develops.
The whole thing about Colin having magical healing powers was kind of a surprise though. It didn't seem to fit very well. He just suddenly exposes them? How come he didn't save himself in the first chapter or use it to stop the burning when he was getting hurt in the first chapter by the collar?
It also seems weird that Sam was being really harsh with Colin, but now Sam's really sensitive to all his freak outs. Is it because he originally saw Colin as sort of a pet/toy, and is now starting to see him as a lover in a sense without even knowing it?
Also, how come Colin couldn't find any chairs when they went for dinner but there were like 3 there... one that Sam hadn't used yet, the one next to it that Colin was supposed to sit at, and the one next to that where the gryphon-raptor lady sat at later?
Anyway, I've rambled on long enough. This story is amazingly hot and I can't wait to dig into it more as new chapters become available. I think all the characters are totally fun and awesome to read about.
I really liked the squirrel chocolate anal scatty stuff. XD That was a lot of fun. I can't wait to see Colin shoved up all kinds of butts and down mouths and I'm really curious to see how the relationship between Colin and Sam develops.
The whole thing about Colin having magical healing powers was kind of a surprise though. It didn't seem to fit very well. He just suddenly exposes them? How come he didn't save himself in the first chapter or use it to stop the burning when he was getting hurt in the first chapter by the collar?
It also seems weird that Sam was being really harsh with Colin, but now Sam's really sensitive to all his freak outs. Is it because he originally saw Colin as sort of a pet/toy, and is now starting to see him as a lover in a sense without even knowing it?
Also, how come Colin couldn't find any chairs when they went for dinner but there were like 3 there... one that Sam hadn't used yet, the one next to it that Colin was supposed to sit at, and the one next to that where the gryphon-raptor lady sat at later?
Anyway, I've rambled on long enough. This story is amazingly hot and I can't wait to dig into it more as new chapters become available. I think all the characters are totally fun and awesome to read about.
2 years ago
I can actually explain the part about Colin's healing powers. See, he can't use them on himself because, well they only work on other people. As a little bit of a backstory, he first discovered his healing abilities during his time in the orphanage, but when the overly-religious nuns caught him trying to help a fellow orphan, they automatically assumed he was some sort of demon. After the incident, they worked on beating him to never use his powers on anyone again, because since Colin couldn't finish healing the hurt orphan she died, and they assumed it was all his doing.
Yeah, info-overload, I'll let the dolphin go now. X3
Yeah, info-overload, I'll let the dolphin go now. X3
2 years ago
Yay! Anal Vore! You guys did great this chapter. *Personally, I would've stayed and went up the squirrle's ass myself while the big bunny fucked my ass.* god i'm so naughty ^_^ 5/5
2 years ago
Another great chapter to a great story. ^^ 5/5! Keep it up! I'm anxioius to see if Colin finally admits his love for Sam. Love it, guys!
1 year ago
Hey are you going to continue with the tory series or are you going to do a story into the past about Colin or are you just going to start a new series.
10 months ago
Well, a great story again! While some have talked about the pet/master relationship, I would think of it more as a servant relationship, or pet as in a loving relationship. Sam has proved that he has feelings, not just an overwhelming sex drive. Great story!
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