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Vote: 5/5
very very good story. do you write a second story?
5/5


that was really amazing. it was hot and wasn't long.


aww how kute ^^


Vote: 4/5
cuuuute..

when you write may, is it a person you created or os it May from the tv series?

but anyway.. good story..


May is someone I created myself in this story, I created this character myself. Sorry to have caused some confusion.


im keeping u on watch


That's good to know, my next story is gonna be a really kinky one.


Congrats! Your fanfic made it to Fan Fiction Friday @ Topless Robot

http://www.toplessrobot.com/2009/09/fan_fiction_friday_may_and_buster_the_teddiursa_in.php#comments


Vote: 1/5
WHOSE RESPONSIBLE THIS?!?

I wanna know who wrote this steaming pile of pedophilic, bestiality shit on purpose RIGHT NOW!

I have my supporters on TR, and they LVOE ME!


Listen to me, I didn't ban anyone from topless robot or yiffstar, check it out yourself and as for the threat, the threat was called off.

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