Writer of transformation and various scaly-type things. Too many kinks to get into here. But isn't that the case with everyone these days? :}===< speciesAmethystine Python gendermale lovesTransformation, liquid shifting, merfolk55submissions78,468page views460comments received280comments posted14,588profile views groups
Your Honor Bound story is great. My only things are that the ending seemed a little short. It had a conclusion but it felt too short. I was also wondering about the underscores around certain phrases: are they emphasis or like parenthesis?
The underscores are for emphasis, like under-lining things. I do that rather than all capping some words. I'd have used italics, but I was formatting it to work with even really low-grade HTML text displaying features, which wouldn't have retained formatting like italics.
Thanks for the watch and the 5/5 vote on the story, too! :}