So just thought I'd check in with every one after finally after god knows how many delays getting my rewrote first chapter up. Anyway just checking in saying things are going some what smoothly for me and the family. hopefully chapter 2 wont take near as long as the first did now that I have a sort of flow set. though i do want to attribute a lot of my improve ment to a book i rescued from the trash one day. http://www.amazon.com/Literature-Structure-Sound-Laurence-Perrine/dp/0035510706/ref=pd_cp_b_0 seriously reading through the chapters on fiction writing, and the examples given, make me wish high school English teachers just told me to read this book all class for four years.