i have a concern, currently with the story i am writing i have hit what i guess could be refered to as a crossroads, not within the narative but regarding how much detail i go into for certain things.
i have a habit of taking a very much "all or nothing" stance with talking about items/objects characters will be using, this comes from my own personal interest in; weapons, Aircraft and vehicles. Unfortunatly though i know that there a pleanty of people out there who do not care for overzealous use of termanology.
so my question is (whilst i am at a point where i can edit into a "dumbed down" version) what does the possible audience prefer when it comes to narative detail.
Detailed names and terminology for items (so a nations own designation for somthing rather than the regular)
a more casual approach, somewhat more vague in the details but still enough to know what items are being used in the narative.
Babies first story, essentially a ...