The beginning is Rater435's original comment on chapter 35. It's going to be deleted from there because, reasons. The logical fallacies in it are obvious enough, but I also have a lengthy rebuttal that I wish to share. My answer is after his comment. You can Control+F =/= to get to my response if you have read this before.
NOTICE: If text in a quote are in the cursive font, then the text has no change from the story and you can find it above (or what was originally there for all you bewildered future readers). Alternatively, if text in a quote is in the fantasy font, then it is not what was originally in the text (a.k.a. parts that are new additions I'm adding to/changing from the original text).
The font known as seriff is what I will use when I'm in the "critic"ing mode.
If I simply type out a comment with the current font...