Wow! Great job. o.o I'm impressed.
Also, I agree with Foxmuscle, it sound somewhat like something from a video game, like something Uematsu could have made for the early FF-games. It could be the repetative manner in which it is written that contributes to this feeling. It is a great loop music, but sort of lacks the seperate parts you'd want in a full song.
Nevertheless, it's defenitely among the best songs I've seen here. Keep up the good work!
By the way: Nice of you to combine the Ryūteki and the Shō, the Dragon and the Phoenix, the Eternal Couple. ^.^